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JadED....a modern love story.

phatbeats33

phatbeats33

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JadED....a modern love tragedy.



DIM THEATRE LIGHTS.
CUE MUSIC.
OPEN CURTAINS.
STAGE LIGHTS.


Girl has massive crush on boy.
Boy not interested in girl.
Girl doesn't see the signs and continues crushing.
Girl confronts boy seeking answers.
Boy still not interested.
Girl continues to crush and make eyes at boy. Send him love notes during class.
Boy has a few drinks on Friday night. Rides bike to girls house at 1am. Booty call.
Girl has now fallen in love...boy now has hangover.

Girl texts boy all week....boy doesn't reply.
Girl corners boy on wednesday in school yard seeking clarification.
Boy mumbles incoherent non committal answer. Still not interested.
Girl takes that as a potential YES.
Girls sneaky friend concurs and encourages her to keep on chasing.
Girls sneaky friend knew boy wasn't interested.
Sneaky friend is now laughing at girl making a fool of herself.

Boy goes out with mates on Friday and gets drunk again.
Boy feeling horny so swings past girls house at 1am again.
Girl is now head over heals in love.


Boy realises school prom is on soon. Doesn't want to be stuck without a date.
Boy caves in and asks girl to be his date.
Girl is now over the moon and begins thinking about life after the prom with boy.
Boy is happy cos he's got a sure fuck on prom night.
Boy intends to party after school year ends so doesn't want a relationship.
Boy will deal with girl problem later...she is 'useful' now.

Boy and Girl go on prom date together.
Boy and Girl win prom king and queen award.
Girl is so happy to finally have her Prince Charming.
Boy fucks girl in car after prom.
Girl texts boy all day. Boy doesn't respond.
Boy texts girl later in the week saying that now schools over he doesn't want a relationship.
Boy goes on to enjoy "life after school" and enjoy the popularity of being prom king.
Boy goes on to enjoy his fame by partying and sleeping around a lot.

Girl has spent all summer at home alone and miserable.
Girl begins going through the years events in her head.
Girl goes through year book photos and videos.
Girl realises her friend tricked her with bad advice.
Girl realises boy never liked her.

Girl now has broken heart.
Girl will find it hard to trust again.
Girl cries.
Alone.


DIM STAGE LIGHTS.
MUSIC TO FADE.
CURTAINS CLOSE.
THEATRE LIGHTS ON.

**applause*

The END.
 
As we get older the more we read into these things the more complicated things become. But after a while spent in anxiety, we come to realise we were right in our first and basic teenage perceptions that nothing is more than it may seem. Everyone's been there if they aren't still going through it

That is just what i think of when I read that.
 
Yeh basically Ed gets blamed by a section of the audience for not accepting the egotistical demand for love from the obsessed female. But this is largely from some of the female part of the audience that want to identify themselves with Jade maybe because of their own past failed demands that someone loves them back.

Also they find Drew more attractive looking and so would have preferred him with her, which was what the producers had planned. Of course the audience conveniently forget that Jade wasn't interested in a Drew showmance.
 
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starry said:
Yeh basically Ed gets blamed by a section of the audience for not accepting the egotistical demand for love from the obsessed female. But this is largely from some of the female part of the audience that want to identify themselves with Jade maybe because of their own past failed demands that someone loves them back.
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Nail on the head.
 
I'm a guy.....33 years old.

In my late teens and even in my VERY early 20s I did what the 'Boy' character (ED) has done.
At the time I thought nothing of it...I figured if I could get way with it to suite my own purposes it was fine.
At the time I was so incredibly obsessed with my own needs that I didn't really SEE what I was doing.

It didn't take me too long to realise I was being a selfish asshole and was probably hurting people in the process. When I eventually snapped out of those ways that was when I felt like I'd become a man. I've never treated another woman (or anyone really) in that way again like I did in those few years.

ED is being blinded by the $250,000 and is treating Jade in that very same way.
Jades naivety is partly to blame....but she just wants to be loved after a bad breakup...she feels a new man, a perfect man will help her heal. She's wrong in thinking ED is that man and she is headed for more (and possibly permanent) hurt.

ED could've stopped that from happening...but he feared losing the $250,000.
He'll be evicted tonight and it'll be too late.
Jades gonna find out the hard way.
 
Tonight Jade made it clear she would make a good match for anyone looking for a partner they can use and abuse and I am NOT saying Ed is that man.

I think she is, sadly, that woman who turns up with a black eye and says "It was an accident" or "He didn't mean it" or worst of all "It's my fault, I made him angry".

That woman who cooks, cleans, raises the kids and turns a blind eye to her husband's cheating and calls his mistresses liars when they try to tell her what he is doing.

I don't want to believe it but I am coming to the conclusion that Ed actually is doing himself a favour by steering clear of that kind of woman.
 
phatbeats33 said:
I'm a guy.....33 years old.

In my late teens and even in my VERY early 20s I did what the 'Boy' character (ED) has done.
At the time I thought nothing of it...I figured if I could get way with it to suite my own purposes it was fine.
At the time I was so incredibly obsessed with my own needs that I didn't really SEE what I was doing.

It didn't take me too long to realise I was being a selfish asshole and was probably hurting people in the process. When I eventually snapped out of those ways that was when I felt like I'd become a man. I've never treated another woman (or anyone really) in that way again like I did in those few years.

ED is being blinded by the $250,000 and is treating Jade in that very same way.
Jades naivety is partly to blame....but she just wants to be loved after a bad breakup...she feels a new man, a perfect man will help her heal. She's wrong in thinking ED is that man and she is headed for more (and possibly permanent) hurt

ED could've stopped that from happening...but he feared losing the $250,000.
He'll be evicted tonight and it'll be too late.
Jades gonna find out the hard way.
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Good point. We must remember that she is only 23 , and a naive girl who has found a guy who everyone calls "Prince Charming". And if you add that physically is a good looking guy who seems to find a stable future with a partner , it´is quite understandable that Jade is in love with the idea of ​​Ed. I don´t like him because I think he´s selfish. He's living the relationship from a comfortable view,you know... no strings attached and just enjoying the moment ( And I can agree with this percept of "love", some people can deal with it, but if you see that the girl/boy is falling in love with you, and you don´t feel the same it´s better (and fair) just finish with that. Any man with sympathy for the girl would do that in my opinion. She has completely dedicated to him and try to get the maximum of him. I sincerely believe that the person who should be mature (for his age and experience) is precisely the one who is having an immature behaviour.
 
phatbeats33 said:
I'm a guy.....33 years old.

In my late teens and even in my VERY early 20s I did what the 'Boy' character (ED) has done.
At the time I thought nothing of it...I figured if I could get way with it to suite my own purposes it was fine.
At the time I was so incredibly obsessed with my own needs that I didn't really SEE what I was doing.

It didn't take me too long to realise I was being a selfish asshole and was probably hurting people in the process. When I eventually snapped out of those ways that was when I felt like I'd become a man. I've never treated another woman (or anyone really) in that way again like I did in those few years.

ED is being blinded by the $250,000 and is treating Jade in that very same way.
Jades naivety is partly to blame....but she just wants to be loved after a bad breakup...she feels a new man, a perfect man will help her heal. She's wrong in thinking ED is that man and she is headed for more (and possibly permanent) hurt.

ED could've stopped that from happening...but he feared losing the $250,000.
He'll be evicted tonight and it'll be too late.
Jades gonna find out the hard way.
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Its been ridiculous watching Eds arrogant behaviour..hes an entitled idiot...but what I find most annoying are his clothes?...theyre mostly one size too small and look like One Directions last year cast offs...perhaps that's why the are too small....most men don't like wearing tight clothes....all the time....he looks like a puppet...he's 26 not 16
 
The tight clothes do not work on his over developed midget body ..and those ridiculous puppet brown shoes he wears with turned up tight jeans.....sorry
 
So many girls like Jade just don't get it. And guys like Ed probably have no idea how much trouble they could be causing. They should teach this in school. They really should. They should make everyone read/watch He's Just Not That Into You in year 7.
 
Every post in this thread is brilliant. You've all said exactly what I'm thinking. Love the opening scene there [MENTION=36609]phatbeats33[/MENTION]!
 
Hats off to you for becoming a man. It's so rare these days to find people who have enough self-awareness to examine how their actions can impact others. It seems that people are just growing older without actually growing up! Hope the girls appreciate you!!! :)

phatbeats33 said:
I'm a guy.....33 years old.

In my late teens and even in my VERY early 20s I did what the 'Boy' character (ED) has done.
At the time I thought nothing of it...I figured if I could get way with it to suite my own purposes it was fine.
At the time I was so incredibly obsessed with my own needs that I didn't really SEE what I was doing.

It didn't take me too long to realise I was being a selfish asshole and was probably hurting people in the process. When I eventually snapped out of those ways that was when I felt like I'd become a man. I've never treated another woman (or anyone really) in that way again like I did in those few years.

ED is being blinded by the $250,000 and is treating Jade in that very same way.
Jades naivety is partly to blame....but she just wants to be loved after a bad breakup...she feels a new man, a perfect man will help her heal. She's wrong in thinking ED is that man and she is headed for more (and possibly permanent) hurt.

ED could've stopped that from happening...but he feared losing the $250,000.
He'll be evicted tonight and it'll be too late.
Jades gonna find out the hard way.
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starry said:
Yeh basically Ed gets blamed by a section of the audience for not accepting the egotistical demand for love from the obsessed female. But this is largely from some of the female part of the audience that want to identify themselves with Jade maybe because of their own past failed demands that someone loves them back.

Also they find Drew more attractive looking and so would have preferred him with her, which was what the producers had planned. Of course the audience conveniently forget that Jade wasn't interested in a Drew showmance.
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Exactly.

I don't much like either jade or Ed, he's a dickhead and she's, fuck knows, limp, a throwback???
But Jade's lame act and relentless pursuit of what she wants, don't add up. The girl has a kind of maneater ego simmering away, and a damsel in distress kind of personality??
She is weird. People are forgetting how she was in the first part of the show too, hanging over any guy and apparently some put her in her place and told her to stop it.
 
I don't think those kisses Jade gives Ed are from her heart, I think she is playing him... I know, most people think Ed is playing Jade.
I'm finding it so over the top, Ed just goes along with it, Jade opens her eyes every now and again to see if Ed's eyes are closed, I just want it to stop!!!!!
I'm so sure that Jade thinks she needs a romance in BB to keep her in as an interesting HM.
Enough I say.... enough!!!!

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I just hope my daughters learn about self esteem when they see Jade and Ed together.

Jade is blindsided by her infatuation, and it is painful to watch. For her own growth and development, I hope she is mortified when she sees herself on tv on leaving the BB house.

[MENTION=36609]phatbeats33[/MENTION] I liked what you had to say. Both Ed and Jade are consenting adults, and both of them have responsibilities here, but we can all see Jade on the cover of TV Week with the headline "Ed broke my heart" in our futures.
 
Curious said:
Hats off to you for becoming a man. It's so rare these days to find people who have enough self-awareness to examine how their actions can impact others. It seems that people are just growing older without actually growing up! Hope the girls appreciate you!!! :)
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[MENTION=36609]phatbeats33[/MENTION], I too say hats off to you.
 
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